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Something More by Safire Syrup

Editor's Note: Congratulations to Safire Syrup for winning this month's competition!



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Every open window that we remember to leave ajar

In every single pre-cognitive dream

Or every piece of hopeless poetry

Was always meant to be;

It doesn’t matter

Where the inhabitants of its room go.

Or how the curtain lies in its own dust;

In its death.

And how the chair beside it sits regally, untouched

And how the mirrors lost their livelihoods

And how the hallways lost their charm

 for now. 


One window, half a door

to something more;

a beautiful hope held within.

Every little open window

Of every abandoned room

Will stay there

Dangerously true;

exaltedly remembered,

No storm in the world

dares slam them shut

 forever.


Instead, they look down from up above

Every day they keep to a trust

Every day a courteous breeze

Reminds a small world 

of what it never got to be

And what it must live to become

And for now, it is left open in soft,

in deep anticipation.


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Winner of Oatleaf's August 2025 Competition.
Theme: Open Window